You sit so silent next to me
We’re in a crowd you’re all I see
You glance at me and spin me round
So fast that I will not touch ground
My mind is whirling with your thoughts
to the point my heart is left distraught
Despite next year you'll be too far,
One day I'll be your only star
Perhaps this wish still needs a voice
but I'll pray to be your only choice
These feelings never seem to end
I just need you to be a friend
Spinning fast, I lose control
Then you smile and
everything
stops.
I apologize for this deformed heart.
To answer the remainders of the requirements, this poem is written to an anonymous person. This person is one of the many people who never fail to put a smile on my face. This person is my inspiration.
Hey Kaitlin,
ReplyDeleteAwesome poem :D I really like how you made it in the shape of a heart!
Agreeing with Michelle!
ReplyDeleteIt matches your background too :]
↑ Those two voiced my opinion.
ReplyDeleteThis is an awesome idea though (:
And you can really feel the emotions seeping off your poem. Plus, I think that it's perfectly fine that the heart is a bit misshapen. It makes the whole appearance even cuter <3
I LOVE THE HEART!! It's a very unique idea; truly a work of art Kaitlin! I bet the guy of your dreams would be melting inside if he read this! Good Job! ;)
ReplyDeleteMichelle, Mio, Kitty, and Danielle, thank you for your input! Your words mean a lot to me.
ReplyDeleteSorry I'm commenting so late. In the future, whether it be comments or criticism, I will listen to them all and reply on time!
And I'm not sure what to say about Danielle's third sentence, but I appreciate the support. :)